Choose an important, memorable event and narrative what occurred:describe in VIVID Details what happened. Explain how that event affects you and how it reveals something important about you as a student or person. Most likely the event will be one in which you learned something( a new skill, something about yourself or a loved one, a life lesson).
Possible topics:
choose a literacy moment: atime when you were learning to read or write in a new way or in a new language.
you might choose a school related achievement or challenge
or something you learned out of school
your goal is to write an essay that helps your reader understand something important about you, using a descriptive language and sufficient details.
you need to help your reader see why this event is important
ABOUT ME: MY NATIVE LANGUAGE IS FRENCH AND I SPEAK SOME ARABIC.
ENGLISH IS A SECOND LANGUAGE, I MOVED A LOT BEFORE COMING TO USA I LIVED IN IRAN, LEBANON, RUSSIA, MOROCCO, DUBAI AND THEN USA I HAD TO LEARN DIFFERENT LANGUAGES TO COMMUNICATE ( FARSI, RUSSIAN,AND ENGLISH) NOW AS I AM NOT PLANNING TO MOVE SO I HAD TO WORK HARD TO MAKE ENGLISH BETTER.
I HAVE A BACHELOR DEGREE IN LAW ( FRENCH) THEN I STARTED ALL OVER A NEW DEGREE HERE IN USA ( BUSINESS ADMINISTRATIVE)
I AM VERY AMBITIOUS FAST LEARNER, CONFIDENT.
YOU CHOOCE THE TOPIC I TRUST YOU, YOU ARE THE BEST WRITER IN THIS WEBSITE. PLEASE COULD YOU JUST DO AS USUAL CLEAR SIMPLE STRONG VOCABULARY AND GOOD STRUCTURE AND GRAMMAR.
( CONTENT AND GRAMMAR, STRUCTURE)
SHE SAID USE LONG SENTENCES AND SHORT SENTENCES TO MAKE IT CLEAR IMAGERY AND WORDS.
Name:
Instructor:
Course:
Date:
Moosh bokhoradet
In Persian language, there is an expression: “moosh bokhoradet” which literally can be translated as “A mouse should eat you!”. Surely, in England this would make so sense whereas in Iraq you may often see parents pinching their kids’ cheeks and saying this phrase in order to emphasize how cute they are. In fact, I came across this saying by chance, when looking through one of my grandmother’s book on the attic. Unfortunately, the name of that edition still remains a secret for me. Anyway, believe it or not, when I was 12 my life has changed forever. It appeared absolutely amazing just how the same word combination can have various meanings in different languages. This was a pure revelation, although the final exams coming up, so the discovery vanished from my memory for a while.
Six months later, my mom broke into the room, shouting “Bryan! Bryan is here!”. Only a few people from his surrounding knew that it was his middle name. In fact, Muriel was his first name, and he preferred to omit it. Coming closer to the point, Bryan was dad’s classmate. They had been studying together for 4 years, and then Bryan’s family moved to Israel. Despite the difference in culture (Bryan was jewish), dad and him happened to be best friends in high school and ever since Muriel left for another country, they would communicate via mail. By the way, his arrival was an absolute miracle owing to the fact that Bryan was being waited no earlier than the 10th of July. Nevertheless, his appearance seemed to be a pleasant surprise and in a couple of hours the table in the dining room was filled with meals of any kind. Actually, Bryan’s favorite cajun chicken pasta was there as well.
After my mom left, I resolved to express respect and greet our guest. I was convinced my parents would like such a hint of politeness. I have not even left the room yet when I heard Bryan hollering about his adventures. I was dazzled with the sunshine light when I walked in the dining room. When I finally got my vision back, me and the guest saw eye to eye. To tell the trull, I never really cherished the idea of having him in our apartment, but now there was a glimpse of joyfulness both in mine and his looks. The very first thing he exclaimed was: “so grown up!”. Bryan last saw me when I still walked under the table, so it is only natural that he should be surprised with me being 2 inches taller than mom. In order to get a better understanding of Bryan’s personality it is essential to visualize his outward image which included brownish-gold curly hair, brown eyes and darkish white skin color as well as his attire: blue jeans, white shirt and a brown leather jacket along with black sneakers on his feet. Bryan was about 6 feet tall and was capable of reaching the ceiling if he was longing to. Moreover, he wore a red hat which, I suppose, attracted tremendous amount of attention. Chances are that this was done on purpose.
After my family sat at the table and began to pray, the whole thing did not feel awkward anymore. The atmosphere was companionable and Bryan’s thrilling stories kept us warm. It turned out, this man was lucky and brave enough to visit more than 100 countries, including Saudi Arabia, Ukraine, African countries, China, New Zealand and even Iceland. Furthermore, Bryan Muriel happened to have crossed the Pacific Ocean in a crew of 6 people. He kept repeating: “Nothing venture, nothing have!”. Ever since this man began to talk there was not a person in the entire room who would venture to interrupt his astonishing speech. After supper I helped my mom to clean up and we all went to sleep. From this point and on I no longer existed, I began to Live, and this life was full of ventures.
I am so appreciative for meeting this person due to the fact that he catalyzed in me the burning desire to travel and explore new places, visit unique cities and learn foreign languages. By the way, Bryan reminded me of the Persian expression I came across a long time ago. The entire image occurred in my mind: myself travelling across the planet, greeting people and tasting delicious food that is so exceptional in every region. It is the matter of common knowledge that now I am staying in the United States, although the countries I toured before moving here presented me invaluable lessons and priceless knowledge. In fact, in order to be able to have conversations with Persians I was expected to learn some Farsi. Lebanon had impressed me with its plantations of cedar trees. In fact, Russian language was one of the most difficult to learn, but I managed to do it. What is more, the level of poverty in some Russian cities captured my heart and encouraged to value what I have. In Morocco I got a chance to taste B’ssara – a creamy soup of drained beans chiefly served for breakfast and topped with a bit of olive oil. As a matter of fact, it felt so contrasting in comparison to the food I was used to that I realized: “Not better, not worse, just different”. Lastly, Dubai inspired me with its state-of-the-art buildings and phenomenal culture. Finally, the USA, often referred to as a “melting pot” taught me democracy, advancement and justice. The experience gained in this country is precious. It is vital that I am planning to stay here and thus my English needs to be improved. Fortunately, this will not be burdensome owing to my remarkable language practice. It is not a top secret that here in the US I started a new degree, namely business administrative, although I already have a Bachelor’s Degree in law.
In conclusion, once upon a time I happened to be called a lucky guy, though personally I believe that hard work pays off. Moreover, luck will make a terrible advisor if you are a lazy bone. In my opinion, confidence, ambitions and fast learning are the synonyms to success. In fact, these three are the helpful keywords when aiming high. It keeps coming to my mind: “Nothing venture, nothing have”.

Choose an important, memorable event and narrative what occurred:describe in VIVID Details what happened. Explain how that event affects you and how it reveals something important about you as a student or person. Most likely the event will be one in which you learned something( a new skill, something about yourself or a loved one, a life lesson).
Possible topics:
choose a literacy moment: atime when you were learning to read or write in a new way or in a new language.
you might choose a school related achievement or challenge
or something you learned out of school
your goal is to write an essay that helps your reader understand something important about you, using a descriptive language and sufficient details.
you need to help your reader see why this event is important
ABOUT ME: MY NATIVE LANGUAGE IS FRENCH AND I SPEAK SOME ARABIC.
ENGLISH IS A SECOND LANGUAGE, I MOVED A LOT BEFORE COMING TO USA I LIVED IN IRAN, LEBANON, RUSSIA, MOROCCO, DUBAI AND THEN USA I HAD TO LEARN DIFFERENT LANGUAGES TO COMMUNICATE ( FARSI, RUSSIAN,AND ENGLISH) NOW AS I AM NOT PLANNING TO MOVE SO I HAD TO WORK HARD TO MAKE ENGLISH BETTER.
I HAVE A BACHELOR DEGREE IN LAW ( FRENCH) THEN I STARTED ALL OVER A NEW DEGREE HERE IN USA ( BUSINESS ADMINISTRATIVE)
I AM VERY AMBITIOUS FAST LEARNER, CONFIDENT.
YOU CHOOCE THE TOPIC I TRUST YOU, YOU ARE THE BEST WRITER IN THIS WEBSITE. PLEASE COULD YOU JUST DO AS USUAL CLEAR SIMPLE STRONG VOCABULARY AND GOOD STRUCTURE AND GRAMMAR.
( CONTENT AND GRAMMAR, STRUCTURE)
SHE SAID USE LONG SENTENCES AND SHORT SENTENCES TO MAKE IT CLEAR IMAGERY AND WORDS.
Name:
Instructor:
Course:
Date:
Moosh bokhoradet
In Persian language, there is an expression: “moosh bokhoradet” which literally can be translated as “A mouse should eat you!”. Surely, in England this would make so sense whereas in Iraq you may often see parents pinching their kids’ cheeks and saying this phrase in order to emphasize how cute they are. In fact, I came across this saying by chance, when looking through one of my grandmother’s book on the attic. Unfortunately, the name of that edition still remains a secret for me. Anyway, believe it or not, when I was 12 my life has changed forever. It appeared absolutely amazing just how the same word combination can have various meanings in different languages. This was a pure revelation, although the final exams coming up, so the discovery vanished from my memory for a while.
Six months later, my mom broke into the room, shouting “Bryan! Bryan is here!”. Only a few people from his surrounding knew that it was his middle name. In fact, Muriel was his first name, and he preferred to omit it. Coming closer to the point, Bryan was dad’s classmate. They had been studying together for 4 years, and then Bryan’s family moved to Israel. Despite the difference in culture (Bryan was jewish), dad and him happened to be best friends in high school and ever since Muriel left for another country, they would communicate via mail. By the way, his arrival was an absolute miracle owing to the fact that Bryan was being waited no earlier than the 10th of July. Nevertheless, his appearance seemed to be a pleasant surprise and in a couple of hours the table in the dining room was filled with meals of any kind. Actually, Bryan’s favorite cajun chicken pasta was there as well.
After my mom left, I resolved to express respect and greet our guest. I was convinced my parents would like such a hint of politeness. I have not even left the room yet when I heard Bryan hollering about his adventures. I was dazzled with the sunshine light when I walked in the dining room. When I finally got my vision back, me and the guest saw eye to eye. To tell the trull, I never really cherished the idea of having him in our apartment, but now there was a glimpse of joyfulness both in mine and his looks. The very first thing he exclaimed was: “so grown up!”. Bryan last saw me when I still walked under the table, so it is only natural that he should be surprised with me being 2 inches taller than mom. In order to get a better understanding of Bryan’s personality it is essential to visualize his outward image which included brownish-gold curly hair, brown eyes and darkish white skin color as well as his attire: blue jeans, white shirt and a brown leather jacket along with black sneakers on his feet. Bryan was about 6 feet tall and was capable of reaching the ceiling if he was longing to. Moreover, he wore a red hat which, I suppose, attracted tremendous amount of attention. Chances are that this was done on purpose.
After my family sat at the table and began to pray, the whole thing did not feel awkward anymore. The atmosphere was companionable and Bryan’s thrilling stories kept us warm. It turned out, this man was lucky and brave enough to visit more than 100 countries, including Saudi Arabia, Ukraine, African countries, China, New Zealand and even Iceland. Furthermore, Bryan Muriel happened to have crossed the Pacific Ocean in a crew of 6 people. He kept repeating: “Nothing venture, nothing have!”. Ever since this man began to talk there was not a person in the entire room who would venture to interrupt his astonishing speech. After supper I helped my mom to clean up and we all went to sleep. From this point and on I no longer existed, I began to Live, and this life was full of ventures.
I am so appreciative for meeting this person due to the fact that he catalyzed in me the burning desire to travel and explore new places, visit unique cities and learn foreign languages. By the way, Bryan reminded me of the Persian expression I came across a long time ago. The entire image occurred in my mind: myself travelling across the planet, greeting people and tasting delicious food that is so exceptional in every region. It is the matter of common knowledge that now I am staying in the United States, although the countries I toured before moving here presented me invaluable lessons and priceless knowledge. In fact, in order to be able to have conversations with Persians I was expected to learn some Farsi. Lebanon had impressed me with its plantations of cedar trees. In fact, Russian language was one of the most difficult to learn, but I managed to do it. What is more, the level of poverty in some Russian cities captured my heart and encouraged to value what I have. In Morocco I got a chance to taste B’ssara – a creamy soup of drained beans chiefly served for breakfast and topped with a bit of olive oil. As a matter of fact, it felt so contrasting in comparison to the food I was used to that I realized: “Not better, not worse, just different”. Lastly, Dubai inspired me with its state-of-the-art buildings and phenomenal culture. Finally, the USA, often referred to as a “melting pot” taught me democracy, advancement and justice. The experience gained in this country is precious. It is vital that I am planning to stay here and thus my English needs to be improved. Fortunately, this will not be burdensome owing to my remarkable language practice. It is not a top secret that here in the US I started a new degree, namely business administrative, although I already have a Bachelor’s Degree in law.
In conclusion, once upon a time I happened to be called a lucky guy, though personally I believe that hard work pays off. Moreover, luck will make a terrible advisor if you are a lazy bone. In my opinion, confidence, ambitions and fast learning are the synonyms to success. In fact, these three are the helpful keywords when aiming high. It keeps coming to my mind: “Nothing venture, nothing have”.